Title: Initial Comments by Bill Fernandez
[Bill Fernandez](http://billfernandez.com/)
 created a long analysis (over 72 pages\!) of ESME and its UI design.

From [Wikipedia](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bill_Fernandez)
:

Bill Fernandez is a user interface architect who was Apple Computer’s
first employee when they incorporated in 1977. He worked on both the Apple
I and Apple II personal computers, and in the 1980s was a member of the
Apple Macintosh development team.
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*You can download the document here:*
*[^ESME Comments, v1 r15.pdf](^esme-comments,-v1-r15.pdf.html)
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